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I just couldn't help myself.

Title: Deceleration
Author: Zinnith
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: PG
Wordcount: ~1100
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine.

A/N: For the Star Trek Reboot Drabble Challenge, prompt #56. Kirk/McCoy, a change of pace. Be warned that I have not written Star Trek since I was twelve (and no, you do not want to read those). Not beta'd, just trying out a few things.

Summary: The thing about Jim Kirk is, he doesn't know how to stop.



Deceleration

The thing about Jim Kirk is, he doesn't know how to stop. For as long as Leonard has known him (it has to be more than three years, feels like forever) he's always been a flurry of motion and activity, never able to sit still, stay put, slow down. Jim is so full of energy that it's like he has his own personal warp core.

Leonard loses track of both time and Jim afterwards. When he finally has Captain Pike stabilised and the most serious injuries in the Sick Bay are bruised shins and egos that the nurses and medics are fully qualified to take care of on their own, he looks up and finds that several hours have passed and that he hasn't seen Jim since their narrow escape from the black hole.

It would probably be a good idea to go up to the bridge and drag Jim down to Sick Bay to get him patched up. Leonard knows how Jim is when he's hopped up on adrenaline like he has to be right now, he won't even feel any injuries he might have. But what Leonard also knows is that there's no use to push when Jim is like this. You have to wait him out. So Leonard keeps himself busy, checks up on his patients, goes over their journals, all the things there wasn't time for before. His eyes are gritty with an exhaustion that reminds him of residency, but he won't go off-duty until he's seen Jim taken care of.

Sure enough, some time later Spock hails him, saying that, "I believe Captain Kirk would benefit from your attention, Doctor." Leonard heads for the bridge, muttering to himself that the green-blooded bastard took his sweet time to start being concerned about Jim's well-being. Jim himself seems to have been quick to forgive Spock for throwing him off the ship, but Leonard has spent over thirty years holding grudges and he can't see any reason to stop now.

Stepping out of the transporter, Leonard can see that he arrived just in time. The acting Captain is stalking around the bridge in constant motion, clearly aware of the fact that if he sits down now, he won't get up again. Jim's a mess. One eye is swelling shut, every inch of skin Leonard can see is covered in dirt and scrapes and bruises.

He has to get right in front of Jim's face before his friend even realises he's there. "Jim, time for your check-up."

Jim just side-steps him, moving more for the sake of moving than anything else. "Later, Bones. I don't have time right now."

Leonard has anticipated this response. He grabs Jim's shoulder and turns him around to face the transporter, prepared to frog-march him off the bridge if he has to. "Now. Or I'll declare you unfit for duty and drag you down to Sick Bay anyway."

Jim turns his head, eyes wide with betrayal. "You wouldn't!"

"Just try me," Leonard answers and pushes him towards the transporter. Jim has to make a show of resisting, of course, but there doesn't seem to be that much fight left in him because he goes with Leonard even while shouting orders over his shoulder to the crew left on the bridge.

Leonard walks to the Sick Bay at a leisurely pace while Jim hurries ahead of him, still with his mind set on the next thing, the next step. "Think you can hurry up a little, Bones?

"Sit," Leonard orders, pointing to a free examination table. "And take your shirt off." Jim leers and jumps up on the table while Leonard draws the privacy curtains shut, feeling strangely possesive. Jim doesn't mind going shirtless. As a matter of fact, he frequently goes to great efforts to lose his shirt. But right now, Leonard wants him to himself. He wants to get reacquainted with Jim's skin, allow his fingers to learn it all over again.

Jim is covered in bruises underneath the shirt as well. Over the course of the past day, he's been beaten up, stranded in a snowstorm, beaten up, choked, and surprise! beaten up again. If Leonard ever has to clean up another drop of Jim's blood, it'll be too soon.

He goes as slow as he can, closing the cuts and desinfecting them. None of the injuries are serious, there's nothing that won't heal with time and a little rest. But Jim's body is all but vibrating under Leonard's hands, like sitting still is causing him pain, and his muscles are so tense that they have to hurt worse than the deep bruises.

"Are you done?" Jim asks as Leonard turns his back, putting away his things. "Can I get back to the bridge?"

Not on your life, Leonard thinks, but what he says is: "In a moment. I want to take a look at your shoulders first."

"There's nothing wrong with my shoulders," Jim protests. Leonard walks up behind him and pokes his thumbs into that place under Jim's shoulderblade where the worst knots are always forming. Jim almost jumps off the table, starting upright with wide eyes. "Ow! Stop that!"

"Do you want to be able to move tomorrow?"

Jim grudgingly sits down again, relaxing just a little bit and Leonard continues his administrations. A muscle relaxant would do the same job, but he likes to do this with his own hands. He takes his time, digging his fingers deep into Jim's coiled-up muscles, loosening them up enough for Jim to be able to rest. He knows how this works by now, knows how to bring Jim down, make him stop for a while.

He'd never say it out loud but he's rather fond of Jim like this, relaxed and a little punch-drunk, swaying slowly from side to side. He's warm and pliant under Leonard's hands, the tension leaking out of him, leaving his body loose and uncoordinated.

Leonard keeps going until Jim's breathing slows down and he stops grunting in discomfort every time Leonard hits a tender spot. Then he just stands still, hands resting on Jim's shoulders, satisfied to feel how the restless, adrenaline-fueled energy has dissipated.

"Better?" he asks.

"Mhmm," Jim mumbles. His eyes are closed, his head leaning back against Leonard's chest. He's all but asleep, finally.

"Come on, lie down for a bit."

Jim lets himself be eased down into a horisontal position and covered with a blanket. For a while, Leonard watches the slow, steady movement of Jim's chest. Then he hails Spock to inform him that the Captain will be resting for a while.

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Date: 2009-05-14 11:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] affectingly.livejournal.com
Oh, I really like this. I love competent!McCoy taking care of Jim. It's adorable. ♥

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Date: 2009-05-14 01:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it! Trying out new fandoms is always scary ;)

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Date: 2009-05-14 11:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beren-writes.livejournal.com
Beautiful fic, you have Bones' voice so perfect and the way he cares for Jim is lovely.

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Date: 2009-05-14 01:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you, I'm glad you think so! The whole point of the ficlet was to try and find a good Bones' voice :D

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Date: 2009-05-14 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] radioactivepiss.livejournal.com
That is so perfect, and so them! Lovely lovely story. I can really see it as a missing scene from the movie.

Also, lol at going to great lengths to lose his shirt. XD

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Date: 2009-05-14 01:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you! I believe Kirk started practicing losing/ripping his shirt at an early age ;)

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Date: 2009-05-14 12:19 pm (UTC)
spikedluv: (st09: kirk&spock - close up by shantalan)
From: [personal profile] spikedluv
Love McCoy taking care of Jim, and knowing him so well.

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Date: 2009-05-14 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you! The movie gave me so much to work with :D

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Date: 2009-05-14 12:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caelumi.livejournal.com
You got McCoy's voice spot on--that dry compassion--and there were more than a few lines (As a matter of fact, he frequently goes to great efforts to lose his shirt.) that made me laugh out loud.

Then again, it might be the fact that I'm a Massage Therapist that makes me biased toward this little ficlet... ~_^

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Date: 2009-05-14 01:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Oh, you're a Massage Therapist? If you ever get to Sweden, give me a call! ;)

I'm so glad the McCoy-voice worked for you!

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Date: 2009-05-14 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] revelininsanity.livejournal.com
I can totally see Kirk driving himself into the ground like that(I mean, au or not, we're talking a guy who manned the bridge after being stabbed in the back! STABBED! In the BACK!), and McCoy is so CUTE!

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Date: 2009-05-14 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Yup, that's my Kirk in a nutshell. ;) Thank you!

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Date: 2009-05-14 01:16 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] tonko-ni.livejournal.com
Oh, lovely, and very vivid. Little bit of light h/c is a great way to start the day.

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Date: 2009-05-14 01:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you! After all the delightful whumping of the film, I felt the boys needed some TLC ;)

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Date: 2009-05-14 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wickedground.livejournal.com
oh gosh, that was so sweet ♥

(you might want to mention this over @ [livejournal.com profile] kirk_mccoy, I'm sure it's appreciated ... also, I link listed the fic in the archive (http://community.livejournal.com/kirk_mccoy/545.html)).
Edited Date: 2009-05-14 02:02 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2009-05-14 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I will post over there right away, thanks for the tip!

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Date: 2009-05-14 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moryssa.livejournal.com
Jim doesn't mind going shirtless. As a matter of fact, he frequently goes to great efforts to lose his shirt.

LOL!

This was very well done. Why is everyone finding it so easy to capture Bones' voice? Do we all have a crotchety old bastard living inside of us? :D

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Date: 2009-05-14 02:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Heh, well I can't speak for everyone else, but personally I am a crotchety old bitch so I can relate ;D

Thank you for reading!

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Date: 2009-05-14 02:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yahtzee63.livejournal.com
Great! Understated and yet very hot, and I love your take on the origin of the Spock-Bones antagonism.

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Date: 2009-05-14 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you, and thank you for hosting the challenge! I always need prompts when I try out a new pairing :D

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Date: 2009-05-14 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saavikam77.livejournal.com
Awww!! I so love McCoy taking care of Jim like this. ^__^ So much loving care in that.

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Date: 2009-05-14 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you! After being beaten up that many times, I figured Jim needed to be taken care of ;)

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Date: 2009-05-14 03:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sevendayloan.livejournal.com
Oh, this was sweet. I love how McCoy managed to take such tender care of Kirk without ever losing his crotchety ol' grumpiness.

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Date: 2009-05-14 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
He wouldn't be my Bones if he wasn't a big grouch... Thank you!

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Date: 2009-05-14 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phantomminuet.livejournal.com
This is lovely. And it doesn't hurt that the thought of a warm, pliant Jim really tips my applecart. :-p~

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Date: 2009-05-14 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
It is a very nice thought. Thank you!

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Date: 2009-05-14 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparky77.livejournal.com
Aw! That was great!

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Date: 2009-05-14 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

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Date: 2009-05-14 05:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raggedy-edge.livejournal.com
Oooh, this was just lovely. The massage therapist in me loves the fact that Bones uses his hands instead of meds to relax Jim, and really, who could keep their hands off of him? ::grin:: And so, now this shall become part of my personal canon for him!

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Date: 2009-05-14 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Why use meds when you could fondle him? Thank you!

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Date: 2009-05-14 05:36 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] the-dala.livejournal.com
I love this! Bones is one grouchy bitch, but he takes good care of Jim when Jim's too stupid to do it himself :)

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Date: 2009-05-14 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Bones is one grouchy bitch
And we love him for it! (And for taking care of Jim, of course.) Thank you!

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Date: 2009-05-14 06:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brilliantnova.livejournal.com
Oh Bones * big grin* I love this truly. It made me hit the giggles a lot:)

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Date: 2009-05-14 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you, glad you liked it! :D

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Date: 2009-05-14 07:25 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ariadne83
Aww! McCoy is so cranky and competent, but affectionate. I don't know what it say about me but this was my favourite line:

he's been beaten up, stranded in a snowstorm, beaten up, choked, and surprise! beaten up again

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Date: 2009-05-15 05:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
I think what it say about us both is that a little h/c is a thing of beauty ;) Thank you!

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Date: 2009-05-14 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zarathuse.livejournal.com
oooh, i really love this. excellent little character study of both mccoy and kirk -- fantastic voices.

also: Jim doesn't mind going shirtless. As a matter of fact, he frequently goes to great efforts to lose his shirt. hee!

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Date: 2009-05-15 05:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
The awesomeness of Jim Kirk repels all shirts. At least that's according to himself ;) Thank you!

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Date: 2009-05-14 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] novembersmith.livejournal.com
Ohhh, my heart! *clutches chest* This was adorable and poignant at the same time, somehow. I love that McCoy is holding a grudge, even if Jim isn't, and how well he knows Jim. Seriously, for such a short fic, it packs a lot in. <3

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Date: 2009-05-15 05:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you! Jim's quick to forgive (destiny and all) but I think Bones will be pissy for many years to come ;)

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Date: 2009-05-14 11:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tmelange.livejournal.com
Beautiful! There is something about this vignette that is so...moving. I like the way you write them. Bravo!

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Date: 2009-05-15 05:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you!

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Date: 2009-05-15 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sgamadison.livejournal.com
There you go again, tempting me to wander into other fandoms by the lure of your lovely little vignettes.

Really nice insights here--and like everyone else, I loved the 'losing his shirt' line--just perfect.

Though I guess since I also wrote ST stories when I was twelve, technically, it is not really a new fandom for me...oh dear. I think I've just been sucked into the black hole of writing *outside* Mcshep...
!!!

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Date: 2009-05-15 05:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Come over to the dark side, we have cookies! And kittens! And shirtless!Jim!

I'm having so much fun re-discovering this fandom! When I first started loving Star Trek, the concept of slash had not yet entered my perverted little brain, so now I can get into it with an open mind :D

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Date: 2009-05-15 06:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evil-alter-ego.livejournal.com
Lovely! Great character voices all around, and I love the relationship between Kirk and McCoy

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Date: 2009-05-15 07:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and that the voices worked for you!

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Date: 2009-05-16 04:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] les342.livejournal.com
Jim is so full of energy that it's like he has his own personal warp core.

I like the whole fic, but I absolute love this line. The imagery produced by that line is great, and it's so true. I never would never have thought of it that way, but it decribes Kirk to a tee, especially the new movie version of Kirk, I think.

I just started looking for and reading fic based on the new Star Trek movie. Have you written anything else? I'd love to read it, if you have.

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Date: 2009-05-16 06:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! This is the first thing I've written in Star Trek that's readable, but there might be more in the future.

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Date: 2009-05-16 12:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] melloniel.livejournal.com
Aw! AW! Ohhhh yes I loved this so much.

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Date: 2009-05-16 12:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D
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