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zinnithSo... I wrote something. And I haven't written anything in three months so I'm hideously out of practice. Also this is my first try at H50 fic so I'm a little nervous.
Is there a kind soul out there who would be willing to look it over for me? It's very very short, roughly 800 words of Steve and Danno being cute and domestic.
Any takers?
Is there a kind soul out there who would be willing to look it over for me? It's very very short, roughly 800 words of Steve and Danno being cute and domestic.
Any takers?
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Date: 2010-12-30 10:35 pm (UTC)I've done some beta work for recent stories of x_erika_x so if you'd like me to look at it, it would be a pleasure.
I like guys being cute and domestic.
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Date: 2010-12-31 09:52 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-12-31 10:02 am (UTC)Looking forward to getting it. I'll get it back to you as soon as poss.
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Date: 2010-12-31 10:22 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-12-30 11:02 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-12-31 12:35 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-12-31 08:58 am (UTC)watched every single ep multiple times & fallen totally in love with Steve & Dannypossibly seen an odd ep or two, & that as I have a passing knowledge of writing, I'd offer my services...I really can't understand you jumping to this conclusion at all!
*cough cough*
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Date: 2010-12-31 09:54 am (UTC)expertisebrief knowledge on the matter is much appreciated!(no subject)
Date: 2010-12-31 09:59 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-12-31 10:28 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-01-01 01:09 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-12-31 01:47 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-01-01 01:02 pm (UTC)Yeah, this show is definitely happy-making. It's bright & sunny & has slashy boys & silly plots & I just LOVE it! \o/
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Date: 2011-01-01 02:28 pm (UTC)You're right, it has all the right elements for a fangirl's dream. I think it has enough of the boom-bang to catch the 'preferred demographic' eye as well. It's very lightweight and I think that is needed to counterbalance all the serious gloom and death shows out there. I just hope that's enough to keep it on the air.
(You do sort of want to send an episode to BW and JM and say, 'um guys? Remember this is how it's done?' *snort*
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Date: 2011-01-01 03:44 pm (UTC)I get plenty of serious and angsty and gruesome from Criminal Minds and Supernatural and while I do love both of those, there are times when I have to save the episodes for when I have enough energy to deal with them. H50 is the perfect show to look forward to during a long, tough workday and then squee about on the 'net :)
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Date: 2011-01-01 08:22 pm (UTC)I'm enjoying the show much more than I thought I would after watching a random ep with D. I had to go back and watch them from the beginning to really appreciate it. Sadly, I don't think it's D's cup of tea, which means I'll have to find it and watch it on my own time. ;-)
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Date: 2011-01-01 01:32 pm (UTC)Also, it's nice to be able to go to Hawaii for at least 40 minutes when the snow is knee-deep outside ;)
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Date: 2011-01-01 02:30 pm (UTC)Given the plethora of dark-themed (and darkly lit) shows out there, it was time someone gave us sun and fun with the guns.
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Date: 2011-01-01 03:46 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-01-01 08:20 pm (UTC)*points to icon and giggles*
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Date: 2010-12-31 09:53 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2010-12-31 10:00 am (UTC)