I really love this. John's emotions are so tangible - worry, fear, guilt and he's beautifully in love as well. You build up the suspense wonderfully & I was so relieved when John finally spotted the flash of orange. I absolutely adore the penultimate scene - the two boys, all cozy and wrapped around each other, so very much in love. ♥ A gorgeous fleece fic! Yay for the fleece!! *g* cep xxx
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Date: 2008-12-28 08:56 pm (UTC)