Okay, so maybe I snuck home at lunch and took a quick peek at this story. Because maybe I couldn't wait until I got home tonight. :-)
And already I'm like "Oh! Oh!" because there's the Team being fractured and unbalanced without Teyla (and it so *would*) and everyone walling themselves off in little islands of pain, and *Ronon* reaching out to John but John's just 'fine'. And a hike through the desert *shudders* with a broken collarbone, not knowing if Ronon and Rodney are still alive!
And this:
“Great,” he tells himself again. It isn’t like there is anyone else around to talk to. “You have a head injury and you’re trying to make decisions that will be vital to your continued survival. Good luck with that.”
That is so *John* it makes my heart clench. *beams and runs off to next chapter*
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Date: 2011-08-01 04:58 pm (UTC)And already I'm like "Oh! Oh!" because there's the Team being fractured and unbalanced without Teyla (and it so *would*) and everyone walling themselves off in little islands of pain, and *Ronon* reaching out to John but John's just 'fine'. And a hike through the desert *shudders* with a broken collarbone, not knowing if Ronon and Rodney are still alive!
And this:
“Great,” he tells himself again. It isn’t like there is anyone else around to talk to. “You have a head injury and you’re trying to make decisions that will be vital to your continued survival. Good luck with that.”
That is so *John* it makes my heart clench. *beams and runs off to next chapter*